2023-2024学年佛山市普通高中高三教学质量检测（一）英语答案与评分标准第一部分（共20小题,每小题2.5分）21C22D23A24C25A26D27B28B29A30C31B32C33A34D35B36G37C38F39B40E第二部分第一节：（共15小题,每小题1分）41D42A43A44B45C46A47B48C49C50A51B52D53D54B55D第二节：（共10小题,每小题1.5分）56based57a58for59traditional60excitement61who/that62toenjoy63dating64areheld65had第三部分第一节（满分15分）一、参考范文：AnEnglishLetterExchangeEventOurschoolrecentlyhostedaninspiringEnglishLetterExchangeeventinanattempttofosterconnectionsbetweenourstudentsandtheirpeersfromTongjiMiddleSchool.Participants,filledwithenthusiasm,exchangedheartfeltEnglishletters,expressingtheirdreamsandwarmwishes.Theprocesswassimpleyetprofound.StudentspennedlettersinEnglish,eachareflectionoftheirhopesandaspirations.Thesethoughtfullyexchangedlettersprovidedanavenueforinter-schoolinteraction.Theeventconcludedwithanoverwhelmingsenseofaccomplishment.Participantswerethrilledwiththenewfriendshipsthey'dformedandthegrowthintheirEnglishlanguageskills.StudentsfromPage1of3{#{QQABDYyEggAgAgAAABhCUQVoCAEQkAGCCIoOAEAMMAAAwAFABCA=}#}bothschoolsexpressedtheirdesireformoresuchopportunitiesinthefuturetostrengthenthesenewlyformedbonds.二、评分原则1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次进行评分。2.评分时,应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为:（1）对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性；（2）使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性；（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意：（1）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。（2）书写较差以致影响交际的,将分数降低一个档次。三、内容要点1.活动的开展及其目的；2.活动的过程；3.学生对活动的反响。四、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（13-15分）:能与明全部要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚第四档（10-12分）:能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误,行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚；第三档（7-9分）:能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多借误，但能基本达意；第二档（4-6分）:能写出部分要点,语言错误多,影响意思表达；第一档（1-3分）:只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多只有个别句子正确。第二节（满分25分）一、参考范文PossibleVersion:Paragraph1:Page2of3{#{QQABDYyEggAgAgAAABhCUQVoCAEQkAGCCIoOAEAMMAAAwAFABCA=}#}Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.MoreandmorecommunitymembersarrivedtomakeWilliam’sbirthdayspecial,eagertoshareintheexcitementofayoungboy’smilestone.Chil-drenplayedtogether,buildingsandcastlesandsharingtheirfavoritetoys.Parentschattedandcon-nected,formingnewfriendshipsonthesun-kissedshoreline.Thetwoinvitedfamiliesalsosenttheirbirthdaywishesthroughvideo.LaughterandcheersurroundedWilliamasheblewoutthecandlesonhisbirthdaycake,aradiantsmilelightinguphisface.Thedeliciousscentofthecakefilledtheairaseveryonegatheredtosing“HappyBirthday”andshareinthesweetmoment.Paragraph2:Afterhoursoflaughterandgames,thesunbegantoset.Thelittleboy’sheartwasfilledwithhappiness,andhecouldn’tstopsmilingashelookedbackontheday’sevents.Asthesundippedbelowthehorizon,itwastimefortheirnewfoundfriendstobidgoodbyeandheadhome.Hisdad,Steven；tooktosocialmediaoncemoretoexpresshisgratitude.＂Thankyousomuch,everyone,forthebirthdaywishesandsupport,＂hewrote.“I’llneverlosefaithinhumanity.”Thesunmayhavesetonthisspecialday,butthememoriescreatedwouldundoubtedlylingerinWilliam’sheartforyearstocome.Page3of3{#{QQABDYyEggAgAgAAABhCUQVoCAEQkAGCCIoOAEAMMAAAwAFABCA=}#}