单击此处编辑母版标题样式单击此处编辑母版文本样式第二级第三级第四级第五级1/18/2021‹#›单击此处编辑母版标题样式单击此处编辑母版文本样式第二级第三级第四级第五级‹#›书面表达之空间类通用版小升初书面表达之空间类目录3.思路点拨2.范文赏析4.万能模板1.典型例题5.写作训练经典例题第一名第二名第三名典型例题请以Myhometown为题，写一篇作文，要求语句连贯，思路清晰，不少于60个词。范文赏析范文赏析Luoyang is my hometown. It is a busyand modern city. It has a long history. There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. You can see green hills, big trees and nice flowers. Many visitors come here to enjoy it. There are many good places to visit. There is a park and a big Shopping Mall. You can see films in WandaTheatre. I hope you can come and visit soon.范文赏析Myhometown思路点拨请以Myhometown为题，写一篇作文，要求语句连贯，思路清晰，不少于60个词。第一步-审题抓点字数要求题目要求第二步-定人称&定时态Luoyang is my hometown. Itis a modern and busy city. It has a long history. Therearemany big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. It is very easy to go shopping. You can see green hills, big trees and nice flowers. Therebe连接开头点题结尾呼应There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here.第三步-搭建结构Luoyang is my hometown. It is a modern and busy town. I hope you can come and visit soon.It have a long history.There is many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. 第四步-检查易错句型There is a park and a big Shopping Mall. Ithasalonghistory.There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. 第四步-检查易错句型There is a park and a big Shopping Mall. 假如这是你的房间，请你根据图片对房间进行描述，要求语言流畅，思路清晰，不少于60词典型例题Ihaveanewroom.Therearetoomanythingsinmyroom.Myhatsareonthesofa.Mybooksareinthebookcase.Myclockisonthechair.Mydictionaryandmypensareonthetable.Mybagsareunderthetable.Mycomputerisonthedesk.Oh,thereisapictureonthewall.Myroomisverynice,butnottidy.Ilikeitverymuch.Doyouhaveyourownroom?Tellme!MyRoom范文赏析假如这是你的房间，请你根据图片对房间进行描述，要求语言流畅，思路清晰，不少于60词第一步-审题抓点字数要求无题目要求第二步-定人称&定时态Ihaveanewroom.Therearetoomanythingsinmyroom.Myhatsareonthesofa.Mybooksareinthebookcase.Myclockisonthechair.Mydictionaryandmypensareonthetable.Therebe连接开头点题结尾呼应第三步-搭建结构Ihaveanewroom.Therearetoomanythingsinmyroom.Doyouhaveyourownroom?Tellme!Thereistoomanythingsinmyroom.Ibooksareinthebookcase.第四步-检查易错句型Thereareapictureonthewall.Therearetoomanythingsinmyroom.Mybooksareinthebookcase.第四步-检查易错句型Thereisapictureonthewall.万能模板010304万能模板你猜中了开头Thisismy....（地点）Welcometo.....（地点）Iamfrom.....（地点）Iwasbornin.....（地点）02010304万能模板猜中了结尾吗Ilovemy......（地点）Thisismy...（地点）Howaboutyou?I hope you can come and visit soon.Do you like my hometown? 020104万能模板过程一样很有意义Thereis.....（物品）Thereare.....（物品）Youcansee.....（物品）03It’sin/onthe...（方位词）02谢谢观看谢谢21世纪教育网（www.21cnjy.com)中小学教育资源网站有大把高质量资料？一线教师？一线教研员？欢迎加入21世纪教育网教师合作团队！！月薪过万不是梦！！详情请看：https://www.21cnjy.com/help/help_extract.php