单击此处编辑母版标题样式单击此处编辑母版文本样式第二级第三级第四级第五级单击此处编辑母版标题样式单击此处编辑母版文本样式第二级第三级第四级第五级书面表达-写景物通用版小升初搞定写作写景篇|写物篇一、课程引入二、课程讲解三、课程总结contents课程引入What’syourfavoriteseason?What’stheweatherlike?Whatcanyoudo?What’syourfavoriteseason?Myfavoriteseasonissummer.What’stheweatherlike?It’susuallyhotinsummer.Whatcanyoudo?Icaneatice-creamandgoswimming.写景篇课程讲解PART01想一想，哪些属于写景作文？MyhometownMyfavoriteseasonMyfavoriteanimalThelastsummervacationIlovemydog写景作文,就是把我们日常看见的那些自然景观或者人文景观,通过文字的方式记录下来。什么是写景作文？课程讲解1.典型例题2.思路点拨3.范文赏析4.万能模板5.写作训练典型例题一请以“Myfavoriteseason”为题，写一篇文章，不少于60个单词。思路点拨二season季节spring春天summer夏天autumn秋天winter冬天weather天气warm温暖的hot热的cool凉爽的cold寒冷有用的词汇一windy有风的cloudy多云的sunny晴朗的rainy下雨的snowy下雪的windy有风的有用的词汇二goswimming去游泳gotothebeach去沙滩eatice-cream吃冰激凌paintpictures画画pickapples摘苹果playinthesnow在雪里玩耍makeasnowman堆雪人goonapicnic去野餐goforawalk去散步flykites放风筝有用的词汇三springsummerautumnwinterwarmhotcoolcoldpickapplesflykiteseatice-creammakeasnowman连一连造句练习。It’s______and____in_______.温度季节warmhotcoolcoldwindycloudysunnyrainysnowywindyspringsummerautumnwinterIusually______in_____.天气季节活动goswimminggotothebeacheatice-creampaintpicturespickapplesMyfavoriteseasonisspring.Ilikespringbest.It’swarminspring.It’swindyinspring.It’sgetting/becomingwarmerandwarmerinspring.Therearegreentreesandbeautifulflowerseverywhere.Icangoonapicnicinspring.Icangoforawalkinspring.Iflykitesinspringwithmyfriends.有用的句子一春天最喜欢的季节季节的天气季节的活动It’shotinsummer.Theweatherishotinsummer.Wesweatlikepigsinsummer.Summerismyfavoriteseason.Ilikesummerbest,becausethere’sasummervacation.Icaneatice-creamandgoswimminginsummer.SometimesIgotothebeachwithmyparents.有用的句子二夏天Myfavoriteseasonisautumn/fall.Ilikeautumnbest.Theweatheriscool.Theleavesturnyellowandthecolorsarereallynice.Iusuallygoforawalkinautumn.Ilikepaintingpictures,too.SometimesIpickappleswithmyparents.有用的句子三秋天Myfavoriteseasoniswinter,becausewehaveSpringFestivalinwinter.It’scoldanditsnowyinwinter.Onsnowydays,it’swhiteeverywhere.Icanmakeasnowmanandplayinthesnow.DuringSpringFestival,Ialwaysgetredpacketsfrommyparents.有用的句子四冬天springsummerautumnwinterweatherwarm,windyhotcoolcold,snow,activitiesgoonapicnic,goforawalk,flykitesgoswimming,gotothebeach,eatice-creamgoforawalk,paintpictures,pickapplesplayinthesnow,makeasnowman,getredpackets范文赏析三My favorite season is summer. It’s hot in summer. There is a summer vacation in summer. I don’t go to school. I think many children like this season, because they can eat ice-cream and go swimming. I can go swimming. Sometimes Igotothe beach with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually visit many places in summer vacation. Ilikesummerbest!My favorite season is summer. It’s hot in summer. There is a summer vacation in summer. I don’t go to school. I think many children like this season, because they can eat ice-cream and go swimming. 1.开篇点题2.描述总体温度3.描述喜欢的原因,暑假是一大原因4.manychildren主要活动I can go swimming,too.Sometimes Igotothe beach with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually visit many places in summer vacation. Ilikesummerbest!6.首尾呼应5.“我”的主要活动万能模板四Therearefourseasonsinayear.Myfavoriteseasonis___.It’s__in__.Ithinkmanychildrenlikethisseason,becausetheycan__Ican__too.Iusually__withmyfriends.SometimesI___.Howinteresting!Ilike__best!写作训练五你最喜欢的季节是什么？为什么喜欢这个季节？写一篇短文，不少于60词。你最喜欢的动物是什么？它有什么外貌特征？它和你有什么样的故事？写物篇课程讲解PART02课程讲解1.典型例题2.思路点拨3.范文赏析4.万能模板5.写作训练典型例题一My Favorite Animal 描写一个你最喜爱的动物，不少于60个单词。提示：可以对其进行外形的描写思路点拨二1.描述最喜欢的动物用到的两个句子有：My_______animalisdogs.I_____dogsbest.2.如何描述动物外貌特征？long,short,fat,thin,tall,short,big,small,cute,noisyItis…Ithas…eyes,nose,mouth,ears,head,body,legs,tail,fur,claw你能用右面词汇句型造句子吗？3.想一想，怎么描述人和小动物的互动呢？Weoftenplaytogether.Sometimes,wegototheparkontheweekends.WhenI’mhome,itfollowsmeallthetime.单击键入文本范文赏析三Ilike animals very much.Ihave a dog.It’smy favourite animal. It’swhite,anditlooks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears. But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.   It often looks atmyfood when I have ameal. When I’m home, itfollows me all the time.When I do my homework, it often sits besideme quietly.I likemy dog very much.Ilike animals very much.Ihave a dog.It’smy favourite animal. It’swhite,anditlooks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears. But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.请你用下划线分别画出点题的，外貌描写的，互动的句子，朗读并翻译。   It often looks at my food when I have a meal. When I’m home, it follows me all the time.When I do my homework, it often sits besideme quietly.I likemy dog very much.Ilike animals very much.Ihave a dog.It’smy favourite animal. It’swhite,anditlooks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears. But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.请你分别画出点题的，外貌描写的，互动的句子，朗读并翻译。  Weoftengototheparktogether.When I’m home, it follows me all the time.When I do my homework, it often sits besideme quietly.I likemy dog very much.修辞的运用比喻Itlookslikeasnowball.它看起来像一个雪球。It_____asnowball.它像一个雪球。looklike=belike像万能模板四Ilike animals very much.Myfavourite animalis___. It’s__,anditlooks li